10 top tips for writing a postgraduate personal statement

Pursuing a master's degree is likely to mark one of the biggest milestones in your personal and professional growth. This makes it an incredibly exciting, yet daunting task.

While there are various components to each degree application , your personal statement arguably holds the most significant weight. It's your opportunity to showcase your passion, skills, and suitability for the programme of your choice.

As such, crafting a compelling personal statement requires careful thought and planning. Read on to learn about our 10 top tips for acing your postgraduate personal statement.

1. Understand its purpose

Before you begin writing, it's crucial to understand the purpose of a personal statement. It's not just a summary of your knowledge and experience. It’s a chance to convey your motivations, aspirations, and highlight what makes you a strong candidate for the programme.

2. Research the course

Tailor your personal statement to the course you're applying to. Research the course content, faculty members, and any unique features of the programme.

What does the curriculum focus on? What skills will it give you? Does it cover anything specific that isn’t covered by similar courses elsewhere? What are the faculty members’ research interests? Does the faculty or department have any connections or networks that you would make use of in the future?

By demonstrating a clear understanding of what the course offers and how it aligns with your academic and career goals, you’re showing genuine interest and dedication.

Looking for an online, postgraduate programme that you can fit in with your career? Explore King's part-time master's courses: 

Discover courses

3. Highlight your achievements

Showcase your academic achievements, relevant work experience, internships, research projects, and personal activities. Focus on experiences that are directly related to your field of study and demonstrate your skills, expertise, and potential to succeed in the programme.

4. Tell your story

Your personal statement should reflect your unique journey, experiences, and motivations. Everyone’s background is different, and that’s exactly what makes postgraduate study so exciting! Use concrete examples to illustrate key points and provide context for your aspirations and goals. Be authentic and genuine in sharing your story, and let your passion for your chosen field shine through.

5. Demonstrate why you’re a good fit

Clearly articulate why you are interested in pursuing this master's programme in particular, and how it aligns with your academic and career objectives. Discuss specific aspects of the curriculum, faculty expertise, or research opportunities that appeal to you and how they will contribute to your professional development.

6. Address any weaknesses

If there are any gaps or weaknesses in your academic record or resume, use your personal statement to address them proactively. Be honest about any challenges you've faced, and explain how you've overcome them or what you've learned from the experience. For example, you may not hold any undergraduate qualifications that are relevant to the degree subject you want to study, but your professional background and experience may compensate for this.

7. Showcase your skills

Highlight transferable skills such as critical thinking, problem-solving, communication, and teamwork. Provide examples of how you've applied these skills in academic, professional, or personal settings, and emphasise their relevance to your chosen field of study.

8. Be concise and clear

Admissions officers review hundreds of personal statements, so it's essential to be concise and to the point. Avoid using overly complex language or jargon, and ensure that your writing is clear, well-organised, and easy to follow. Aim for clarity and coherence throughout your statement.

9. Seek feedback from others

When focusing on a reflective statement alone, we can often be unaware of our shortfalls – from the tangents we break into to the ways we sell ourselves short. Before finalising your personal statement, seek feedback from either your Enrolment Advisor , or a mentor or friend. They can provide valuable insights and suggestions for improvement. Consider their feedback carefully and revise your statement accordingly to ensure it effectively represents your strengths and motivations.

10. Proofread and edit

Meticulously proofread your personal statement to eliminate any grammatical errors, typos, or inconsistencies. Pay attention to formatting, punctuation, and overall readability. If English isn’t your first language, it’s always a good idea to have a native English speaker give it a final sense-check. A polished and error-free personal statement reflects your attention to detail and professionalism.

Writing a postgraduate personal statement requires thoughtful reflection, research, and attention to detail. By following these tips, you can craft a compelling and persuasive statement that effectively showcases your strengths, ambitions, and suitability for the master's programme of your choice.

Want more application advice?

  • Share on Facebook
  • Share on LinkedIn
  • Share on Twitter

Related articles

5 reasons why submitting your master’s application early pays off

20 Feb 2024

5 reasons why submitting your master’s application early pays off

Explore benefits of submitting your master's application early, from securing a spot to accessing funding opportunities.

You have the potential. We’ll help you unleash it. Take charge of your future today.

Questions about our courses, studying online or the application process? Our expert Enrolment Advisors are on-hand to help. Simply fill in the form below, and they’ll get in touch with you shortly.

Nutrition Science

Graduate student studies in a kitchen setting

Program Overview

Whether you are already working in a health-related field, or have an interest in nutrition policy, athletics, research or beyond, there is a demand for graduate-trained professionals who are skilled in the application of evidence-based nutrition strategies. With employment predicted to grow at a faster-than average rate of 16% through 2024, and entry-level median salaries in the range of $60,000, there has never been a better time to pursue a master’s degree in nutrition science at King’s College.

king's college master personal statement

  • Admission Events

Take your career to the next level

The King’s College Master of Science in Nutrition Science program is a 36-credit, online degree program geared to busy working professionals who want a competitive advantage in the job market. With courses that explore nutritional biochemistry and physiology, our students are prepared to meet current health challenges both here at home and abroad.

Key Benefits

  • Convenient and completely online so you can study around your own schedule
  • An adaptable schedule allows you to complete the program in as little as 24 months
  • Diverse, science-oriented curriculum designed to help set you apart in the workplace
  • Highly trained faculty who are actively involved in their fields
  • No GRE required for admission

two people using a computer

Who is this program for?

Our Master of Science in Nutrition Science degree is dedicated to educating the next generation of health and nutrition educators. The program is tailored to adult learners from health care fields who want to enhance their careers with additional nutrition expertise.

Why King's?

  • Our streamlined curriculum reflects the latest nutrition science research and aligns with current professional opportunities. Our graduates are ready to meet the world’s growing interest in personal and population health and wellness. Through our program, you’ll:
  • Gain an in-depth understanding of nutrient metabolism and the changing nutritional needs throughout the human lifecycle, along with specialized topics in applied nutrition science.
  • Effectively translate health and nutrition science information for a variety of audiences.
  • Increase your understanding of health care ethics and nutrition research.
  • Develop your communication skills using evidence-based practice.

King’s MSNS program offers the tools you need to make a difference in people’s lives and gives you an edge over other job applicants. If keeping people healthy through improved nutrition is appealing to you, learn more about King’s MSNS admission requirements or start your application today.

Accreditation Status

The MSNS program is not an accredited program that leads to the Registered Dietitian Nutritionist (RDN) credential. However, if you are interested in an RDN credential through an accredited program, explore our Master of Science in Nutrition and Dietetics (MSND). The King’s MSND program has been granted candidacy status by the Accreditation Council for Education in Nutrition and Dietetics (ACEND*) of the Academy of Nutrition and Dietetics, 120 South Riverside Plaza, Suite 2190, Chicago, IL 60606-6995, (312) 899-0040 ext. 5400. Visit the ACEND webpage here.

Contact Dr. Diane M. DellaValle, [email protected] or 570-208-5900, ext. 5444 for more information.

*The Accreditation Council for Education in Nutrition and Dietetics (ACEND) released the Future Education Model Accreditation Standards for programs in nutrition and dietetics. These accreditation standards integrate didactic coursework with supervised experiential learning in a competency-based curriculum designed to prepare nutrition and dietetics practitioners for future practice.

Additional Info

Program mission and goals.

The mission of the MSNS program echoes that of King’s College, with a specific focus on “pursuing excellence in teaching, learning, and scholarship,” as well as “student formation in a nurturing community.” We strive to engage learners in a collaborative, interactive learning environment that encourages critical inquiry and ethical, evidence-based nutrition practice.

Upon completion of the Master of Science in Nutrition Science (MSNS) program, students will be able to:

  • Critically evaluate and translate scientific evidence-based health and nutrition science research.
  • Apply evidence-based science to design and implement nutrition education and health promotion programs.
  • Utilize best practices in communication and teaching techniques to deliver nutrition education and health promotion programs.
  • Apply and demonstrate best practices in digital communications to interface with clients, customers, peers, administrators, and health care providers.
  • Communicate evidence-based health and nutrition research to a wide variety of audiences.

Admission Requirements

Students with undergraduate or advanced degrees in health, life, or basic sciences from accredited institutions are prime candidates for our program. This program is also well suited for students who have a background in biological sciences or are interested in acquiring a stronger nutrition expertise for another discipline. To apply to the program, you must meet the following criteria:

  • Successful completion (B or better) of Anatomy & Physiology I and Anatomy & Physiology II (no labs required; all body systems need to have been covered)
  • Successful completion (B or better) of Organic Chemistry (no labs required)
  • Successful completion (B or better) of Biochemistry (no labs required)
  • All prerequisite courses must be taken for course credit and for a course grade at an accredited institution of higher learning.
  • Undergraduate GPA of 3.0 or better

In addition, you must provide your current resume and a 1000-word personal statement detailing why you are interested in applying to this program, why you want to study of nutrition sciences, experiences that have helped prepare you for a career in this field, short and long-term goals, and your professional strengths and weaknesses.

All prerequisite course work, including official transcripts and all application requirements, must be complete and uploaded at the time of application submission.

Applicant Selection Process

Complete graduate applications are scored based on GPA (including cumulative GPA and overall science and prerequisite GPA). Additional points are awarded for advanced degrees, graduate course credits, relevant coursework (earning a B grade or better), professional work, volunteer work, and other experiences. The quality and quantity of any health care experience or shadowing hours are also scored.

Your personal statement, CV/resume, references, and other experiences (work experience, community service, and extracurricular activities) included on your application are also scored, in addition to general communication and following of instructions throughout the application process (such as formal and informal interactions with program faculty and graduate admissions staff).

The King’s College graduate admissions staff and nutrition programs faculty will notify selected candidates within four weeks of the application deadline. This selection process will continue until the class is filled, or until July 20, whichever comes first. A mandatory virtual orientation is held the first week of August before classes start.

Meeting minimum prerequisites does not guarantee admission. Once accepted, graduate applicants will be required to submit a non-refundable deposit to secure their seat. This deposit will then be applied to their tuition.

Application Deadlines

  • Application opens August 15, 2024
  • Application deadline is January 15, 2025
  • Applications are reviewed from January 15 to February 7, 2025
  • Applicants are notified of decision by March 1, 2025
  • Applicants need to accept or decline by March 15, 2025

Ask the Dietitian

Degree requirements, graduation requirements.

To be eligible for graduation, students must meet the following criteria:

  • Completion of all MSNS coursework
  • A minimum of a B grade in all coursework
  • No more than two C grades in all coursework
  • Completion of reflective ePortfolio kept throughout the program

Technical Requirements

Technical requirements for online programs.

If you have any questions on our online graduate programs or even just technical requirements listed on this page, please get in touch. We will be happy to walk you through any details.

Requirements

  • Access to a computer and the internet
  • Hardware and internet connection may be incompatible in cases of employer-provided computers and networks, public computers, and public internet hotspots
  • Internet speed: 1.5 Mbs upload and download required, Basic broadband (4 Mbs) recommended, speedtest.net allows you to test the speed at your location
  • Webcam or Smartphone camera
  • Microsoft Office: Free and available to students with their @kings.edu account via Office 365, Includes Microsoft Outlook for your @kings.edu email
  • Access to a scanner or scanning app

Computer Proficiency Requirements

Although your faculty are there to support you, in order to comfortably participate and succeed in an online course environment, online students must have basic computer literacy skills and, at a minimum, have proficiency with the following:

  • Using a keyboard and mouse
  • Sending and receiving email
  • Using common software applications including, but not limited to those found in Microsoft Office (Word, PowerPoint, Excel) or similar office suites such as Google Apps
  • Recording video presentations with your computer or smartphone camera and microphone and uploading to video hosting services such as YouTube
  • Using a text editor (changing fonts, inserting links, using spell check, etc.)
  • Saving and retrieving files in different formats (.docx, .pdf, .pptx, etc.)
  • Installing and updating software
  • Selecting, copying, and pasting text
  • Accessing the internet using a web browser such as Chrome or Firefox
  • Resetting basic browser settings (clearing cache/history, cookies, etc)
  • Performing basic internet searches with appropriate search terms
  • Locating and copying web addresses/URLs
  • Browsing for files to attach and upload; extracting zip files

Tuition and Aid

The graduate program is 36 credits in total, with tuition priced at $827 per credit for the 2024-2025 academic year. 

Anticipated MSNS Professional Program Fees:

  • Graduate Year 1: 18 credits at $827 per credit totalling $14,886
  • Graduate Year 2: 18 credits at $827 per credit totalling $14,886

King's College does not provide financial aid to graduate students. However, graduate students can apply for federal and state financial aid and for private loans. You are strongly encouraged to contact the Office of Financial Aid if you have questions about tuition and fees. Contact us by phone at (570) 208-5876 or email at [email protected].

The following are additional fees and expenses for the MSNS program not included with tuition:

  • Laptop computer: $1,500
  • Textbooks and required software/apps: $2,000
  • My Playlists
  • Media Upload
  • Stitch videos

King’s College London

  • Discover King's
  • King’s Strategic Vision 2029
  • Strategy Planning & Analytics (Staff Only)
  • Lectures & Seminars
  • Welcome to King's
  • Arts & Humanities
  • Associateship of King's College
  • Business School
  • Dentistry Oral & Craniofacial Sciences
  • Florence Nightingale Faculty of Nursing Midwifery & Palliative Care
  • Institute of Psychiatry Psychology & Neuroscience
  • King's Academy
  • King's Foundations
  • Co-creation
  • King's Online
  • FoLSM MBBS Introductions
  • Innovation Scholars
  • Modern Language Centre
  • Natural Mathematical & Engineering Sciences
  • Social Science & Public Policy
  • Demonstrations
  • Research & Innovation
  • King's Experience
  • Student Wellbeing
  • Accommodation
  • Student Services
  • Disability Support
  • Advice & Guidance
  • Libraries and Collections
  • Counselling and Mental Health

Postgraduate Virtual Open Week: Writing your Personal Statement - 23 Nov 2021

ScholarshipTab

How To Write A Personal Statement For Masters (17 PDF Sample Examples)

Published: 14 Mar 2022 Study Abroad 110,156 views

How To Write A Personal Statement For Masters (17 PDF Sample Examples)

A personal statement for masters program is one of the most important parts of your college application and writing a good one is what’s the exception between receiving an offer and being rejected.

If you’ve been tasked with presenting a personal statement, you should keep in mind that whatever you submit must put you forward as the right candidate for the course. Additionally, it should convince the admissions officers that you deserve a place on your program of study.

Achieving the above, is a skill most postgraduate students are yet to acquire but thankfully this article on How To Write A Personal Statement For Masters covers everything you need to know on doing this.

In this article you’ll learn:

  • What is a personal statement?
  • Tips for making your personal statement for masters stand out
  • How to write a personal statement for masters
  • Personal statement for masters sample
  • Examples of personal statement for masters
  • Conclusion – things to avoid when writing a personal statement for masters

Read:  Admission Interview Tips .

What Is a Personal Statement?

A personal statement AKA admissions or application essay or statement of purpose is a type of essay or written statement a candidate presents to a college, university, or graduate school they are applying to, explaining why they want to attend that school, study a particular course, and why they would be a perfect fit for these things.

A personal statement for masters is an essay you submit specifically for your postgraduate application. Writing one presents the opportunity for you to promote yourself to a school and show the admissions teachers that you are the perfect candidate for a course.

Tips For Making Your Personal Statement For Masters Stand Out

Before we get into how you should write a statement of purpose for masters, we would first like to share with you certain tips to include in your essay to make it stand out from that of other applicants and be convincing enough to any admissions officer that reads it. The tips we have mentioned here, cover general things like starting and ending your personal statement, timing, length, and what to include and what not to include in the essay, etc.

1. Starting And Ending A Personal Statement

When starting a personal statement, you would want to right off the bat grab the reader’s attention. To do this, start the statement by writing about your degree of choice, next why you want to study it and then how you got interested in it.

The next 2 sentences after that should cover a summary of your background in the chosen field, and you conclude by saying what you plan to do once you acquire your graduate degree.

Also start with that the evaluators reading want to hear first, then every other information should come second. You will notice we’ve used in the sop examples for masters we will share with you later in this article.

2. Plan Ahead

A personal statement is not something you rush while writing, which means if you want to get something good before you application then you must start to decide things like the length and how long it should take to complete.

Let us throw more light on this…

For length, a personal statement should be brief ranging somewhere between 500 -700 words, although schools often detect how long it should be. So, this is dependent on the institution you are applying to.

In terms of what to say in a statement, you could include personal experiences like why you were driven to apply for the program, an experience you had with a scholar in your chosen discipline, a course you took that inspired you to pursue masters, or a key moment during your studies which further motivated you.

No matter what you decide to write, just keep in mind that you need to take your time to craft something good even if it means creating several drafts before the real thing and do not forget to proofread the statement for errors.

3. Research Your Program Of Study

Researching your program of study is one way to establish that you truly understand the discipline you’re getting into and prove to the admissions officer that you thoroughly thought about it before applying.

And because you want to put yourself forward as a serious candidate, one way to make you research easier is for you to visit the website of the department you are applying to. This page will contain information about faculty members, their specialisation, and publications.

From the intel, you gathered there you can now identify which professors match your interests and which ones you will benefit the most from learning under. After you’ve found this out, relate the same in a sentence or two in your statement of purpose for masters.

Example: “I would be honoured to study under the tutelage of Professor Nadia whose work I found resonated strongly with my beliefs and intended projects in this course”.

4. Avoid Clichés, Junks, And Many Details

When writing a statement of purpose for master degree try to avoid clichés, junks, and unnecessary details so that you don’t lose or bore your readers in between. Be as concise as possible, even if it’s your chance to express yourself.

A personal statement is an opportunity for the admissions committee to get information that tells the that you are suitable for the course. So, when you overpower your statement with too many words, stories, and useless details, you come off as someone who is just trying to meet the word count.

5. Include Your Personal History Only If It Adds To The Statement

Do not include your personal history in your statement of intent for masters if it is not relevant to your purpose of study. This means no need for you to tell that story about that time you helped someone treat a cut and immediately realised that you wanted to be a doctor or nurse or how you developed a taste for reading at a very young age.

We can guarantee you that the hundreds of other applications competing for the same spot you are felt the same way, so saying those things really doesn’t make you unique.

On the other hand, if you are going to add personal history to your statement, you can put in things like an internship you did and the experience you got from the job, a major research project you ran by yourself, publications you’ve read or published, conferences you’ve attended or presentations you’ve done. These experiences are more concrete and are directly related to your program of study. They also set you apart from other applicants.

6. Don't Use The Same Personal Statement For All Your Applications

One common mistake applicant make that you shouldn’t is using the same statement of purpose for master degree for all your applications. Using the same information repeatedly even if you are going to change the university names is risky and could land you in a big mistake on a day you forget to be thorough.

All programmes have their own unique set of questions they want to see answered and information they need in your personal statement.

And even if some of them like extracurricular activities, proposal for project, why you are applying to the school, your unique qualities, and research works you’re doing might appear the same, do not use one statement to respond to all of them.

Write a new unique personal statement every time you want to apply.

Check out:  How to Write a Good CV for Students - Resume Examples for Students (PDF).

How To Write A Personal Statement for Masters

When writing a personal statement for masters there are several steps and ground rules you need to follow to ensure that it comes out good enough to impress the admissions team of a school, and ultimately convince them to give you a spot on your program of study.

If writing one is something you are currently struggling with and can’t seem to get down the process of it right no matter what, this section on how to write a personal statement for masters, discusses in detail everything you need to get help with yours.

There are 4 parts to consider when writing your personal statement and we have listed them below:

1. Planning A Personal Statement

A personal statement is a piece of writing showing your academic interests and is only for application purposes which means there is no room for any autobiographical information in it about your personal life. Be as to-the-point as possible when writing it and stick to telling the school why you are the right person for the course, plus any other extra information detailing your achievements.

Before You Start:

Allot plenty of time to write your msc personal statement so that you don’t rush it. Remember, this simple piece of writing is your one shot at convincing a school that you are the best applicant they’ve seen and as such can either make or break your application.

Read the information expected of you from the university, rules and guidelines given, selection criteria and understand what they mean. Also research the institution.

Do a thorough research on the course you are applying for; this will help you explain better why you want to study it. The tutors interviewing you can tell when you are lying and presenting yourself as uninformed can cost you the admission.

Ensure that you don’t use the same personal statement for all your applications.

When Writing:

When writing the statement there are some questions to ask yourself that can help you plan it better. Those questions are:

  • Why you want to study a master’s and how does it benefit you in future?
  • How does the course you have chosen fit into your pre-existing skill set?
  • How do you stand out from the crowd as an applicant - e.g., work experiences you’ve had in the same field you are applying for?
  • What do you aspire to do or be as a future career and how will the course help you achieve that?
  • How can your work or skillsets contribute positively to the department/ university you are applying to, or society at large?

On the other hand, if you are applying for the masters to change from the field you studied in your undergraduate to another field, you should tell the school why you decided to take a different path in your studies.

Questions to ask yourself for this include:

  • Your reason for deciding to change your discipline.
  • How your undergraduate degree will be material for bringing fresh insights into your masters course.
  • How changing your study path will help you attain your future career.

2. Structuring A Personal Statement

Having good structure for your personal statement for master degree is important because it ensures that everything from the beginning, middle, and ending of the statement is written and equally falls in place perfectly.

We’ve left some tips for you below to help you:

Start your personal statement with an attention-grabbing introduction that is not dramatic or cliché. That means you should not begin with any of these over-used phrases we’ve listed out below:

For as long as I remember…

Since my childhood…

I want to apply to this course because I’ve always felt a strong connection to it…

All my life, I have always loved…

My interest in (course) always ran deeper than…

I’ve always been zealous about…

Ever since I was a child, I’ve always wanted to pursue a career in…

My past educational experiences have always…

'My passion for Child Psychology is influenced by my curiosity in how autism affects the personality of children living with this condition. That's why I dedicated the 3rd year of my undergraduate study interning with the Child Rehabilitation Centre in my community, which caters to the patients and work closely with their families in developing care plans that work for their child.

You would want to be as snappy as possible with your opening because the admission officer has over a hundred applications to read and can’t waste all their time on yours. This means you should avoid overpowering it with unnecessary facts, quotes, and stories from your life.

The middle part of your ma personal statement is where the main content of the write-up should be. This is where you show your dedication to the course you’ve chosen, what motivated you to choose it, and why you are the right candidate for it.

When writing the middle part of a graduate personal statement, you should:  

  • Give concrete reasons why you want to study a course at the University. The reason could be because of how the course is aligned to your future career or the University’s reputation in teaching that program.
  • Mention relevant things like projects, dissertations, or essays you’ve done, and any work experience you have.
  • Show proof of your core skills like and how they can contribute to the department.
  • Prove what makes you a unique candidate.
  • Discuss who your main influences for wanting to study the course are and why.
  • Add experiences like memberships to clubs that are related to your field, papers you’ve written before, awards, scholarships, or prizes.
  • Draw focus to how the course links to your past and future.
  • Mention your academic and non-academic skills and how they fit the course.

For Formatting:

  • Keep the statement length between 250 -500 words or as directed by the school.
  • Sentences should be no more than 25-30 words.
  • Use headings to break up the content – Why this university? Why this subject? Etc.
  • Make claims and provide evidence to back each of them up. This can be done by discussing your work experience and academic interests.

Language and tone to use:     

  • The tone for your masters application personal statement should be positive and enthusiastic, to show you eagerness to learn and so that you convince the evaluators that you have what it takes to succeed.
  • Use exciting and refreshing language, and an engaging opening line.
  • Ensure you grammar, punctuations, and spellings are accurate.
  • Avoid exaggerated claims you cannot backup.
  • Don’t use cliché generic terms and keep your focus on the course.

Keep the ending of your essay for master degree application concise and memorable, leaving no doubt in the admission officers mind that you deserve a spot on the program.

To create the best ending summarise all your key points without dragging it our or repeating yourself. The ending should be simple, end on a positive note and make it clear that the school will be lucky to have you on their program.

Personal Statement for Masters Sample

In this section, we have left a masters personal statement example for you, which you can use as material to write yours for any course of study you are applying to a school for.

My passion for Filmmaking, was influenced by my growing up reading novels and plays by my idols William Shakespeare, Tennessee Williams, and Maya Angelou, which graciously provided me with the opportunity to not just hear good stories, but also appreciate great storytellers whose plays still shake the foundations of the film industry.

Growing up, I loved movies and found myself fascinated by the stories, the characters and most importantly the realization that the human mind could create something so beautiful and gripping. I studied each film like a guide and whenever they ended, I would act out the scenes on my own, putting on a one-woman show for myself whenever I was alone at home. These things would later form the basis of me writing my first published book which was a drama titled The Reward of Evil Deed.

To me, loving literature and chasing it down all these years was something that made me different, but I also enjoyed it because films are more than something I just wanted to watch and forget, it is something that I wanted to be a part of. I didn’t just want to appreciate great films, I wanted to make them.

During my bachelor’s degree in India, I had the privilege of taking Literature classes stemming from British, American, and Indian literature to broaden my mind. I was also opportune to read great authors like John Donne, John Milton, Emily Dickinson, Charles Dickens, Mark Twain, Anton Chekov, Virginia Woolf, and of course Margret Atwood who I follow closely on Instagram. Three years later not only did I graduate as one of the best students in the school, but I did so with a first-hand knowledge of what it means to be a passionate storyteller whose art transcends time, language barrier, and location.

In addition to devouring Literature and watching satirical films like it’s the news, I am also an avid reader and prolific writer who throws herself into whatever she sets her heart on. I am the proud author of Forgetting Bangalore which is a personal memoir about my three years of studying in India, read amongst my closest friends who I shared those times with. In school, I also wrote the script for a short film for the class Psychology assignment titled The Ordeal which I uploaded to my YouTube page and uploaded to my application form.

Apart from writing for myself, I also function as a content creator/marketer for companies I have worked for in the past and is still working for now. I play the Bass guitar well and occasionally dabble in Lead guitar.

For far too long, I have aspired to be, but now I want to become a filmmaker and I strongly believe that through your institution that I would be able to learn and master all the aspects associated with filmmaking. I hope to attend Central Film School next year, enrolling in MA Practical Filmmaking under the tutelage of the amazing Faculty members.

Although I don’t have the professional skills or much of a background in filmmaking, I am passionate and have a zeal burning strongly that it will set the film industry on fire. I am a good storyteller, I am brilliant, resilient, and determined to succeed, and when I want something, I push until I get it, I am also a fast learner. I strongly believe that these attributes are what will help me successfully complete this master’s program.

Personal Statement PDF

You can also download this statement of purpose sample for masters degree pdf here and take your time to read it later – Personal Statement For Masters Sample .

See Also:  Student CV Template .

Examples of Personal Statement for Masters

We have taken the time to source for some of the best postgraduate personal statement examples, which you can use in addition to the personal statement for masters program example as a template to write yours.

While you scroll through our list, you will find the perfect masters essay example for any field you wish to apply for, from business administration, to Psychology, to information technology, and lots more.

1. msw personal statement

We have found one of the best msw personal statement examples out there for you.

social work masters personal statement .  

2. personal statement for masters in public health

mph personal statement examples

3. personal statement for masters in management

Personal statement for master degree sample for masters in management .  , 4. personal statement for masters in education example.

personal statement for masters in education example

5. psychology masters personal statement

psychology masters personal statement example

6. sample personal statement for masters in data science data science masters personal statement

7. speech and language therapy personal statement statement of purpose for masters sample: speech and language therapy

8. business administration personal statement personal statement for masters in business administration

9. personal statement for masters in cyber security pdf masters degree personal statement examples for cyber security

10. personal statement for masters in finance msc finance personal statement examples

11. statement of purpose for masters in information technology pdf msc personal statement examples for information technology

12. international development personal statement statement of purpose for masters example

13. msc international business management personal statement international business management personal statement examples

14. computer science masters personal statement

statement of purpose for masters in computer science pdf

15. personal statement for masters in economics statement of purpose sample for masters degree in economics

16. mha personal statement statement of purpose format for masters in health administration    

Conclusion – Things to Avoid When Writing A Personal Statement For Masters When writing a personal statement for university masters, there are some things you should avoid, so that you don’t ruin your essay. We have listed out those things below: •    Avoid negativity. •    Following an online template blindly. •    Do not include unnecessary course modules, personal facts, or extra-curricular activities in your personal statement. •    Do not lie or exaggerate an achievement or event. •    Do not include inspirational quotes to your statement. •    Avoid using clichés, gimmicks, humour, over-used word such as 'passion' or ‘driven’. •    Do not make pleading statements. •    Avoid mentioning key authors or professors in your field without any explanation. •    Avoid using sentences that are too long. •    Avoid flattering the organisation or using patronising terms. •    Do not repeat information in your statement that you have already listed in your application. •    Avoid waffling i.e., writing at length. •    Don’t start writing your personal statement at the last minute.  

Related Articles:

How to Write a Good Letter of Recommendation for Students (10 PDF Sample Examples).

How to Write a Good Financial Aid Appeal Letter (13 PDF Sample Examples).

How to Write a Good Personal Statement for a Scholarship ( 7 PDF Sample Examples).

How To Write A Good Motivation Letter For Scholarship (4 PDF Sample Examples).

How To Write A Letter Of Intent For Scholarship (4 PDF Sample LOI Example).

Latest Blog Posts

  • US Visa Types Fees & Requirements
  • 20 Free Social Media Marketing Course
  • 30 Best Medical Universities In The US 2024
  • Tips To Find And Apply For Scholarships Online
  • 30 Best Study Techniques To Try This 2024
  • 26 Best Country To Teach English 2024
  • 26 Best Free AI Chatbot 2024
  • 20 Best Countries To Relocate 2024
  • Best Scholarships
  • DAAD MIPLC Scholarships for Students from Developing Countries (Germany) 2024
  • University of Miami 2025 Stamps Scholarship (Fully-funded)
  • University of Michigan African Presidential Scholars Program 2024
  • Mastercard Foundation Scholars Program at the University of British Columbia 2024
  • UK Commonwealth Scholarships for Developing Countries 2024
  • Korea Advanced Institute Of Science and Technology (KAIST) Undergraduate Scholarship 2024
  • King's College London Chevening Scholarship for International Students 2024
  • US-CDC 2024 Public Health Informatics Fellowship Program (PHIFP)

uscholarships

Scholarship Tips

Scholarships by country to study.

  • United Kingdom
  • United States
  • South Africa
  • New Zealand
  • Netherlands

Scholarships by Category

  • Postgraduate
  • Undergraduate
  • College School
  • Entrepreneurs
  • Bachelors Degree
  • Women Scholarships
  • Fully Funded

Scholarships by Country of Origin

  • African Students
  • Developing Countries

Scholarships by Institution / Company

  • Flinders University
  • German Academic Exchange Service (DAAD)
  • University of Edinburgh
  • The World Academy of Sciences (TWAS)

Scholarships by School

  • University of Melbourne
  • University of Kent
  • University of Oxford
  • University Of Queensland, Australia
  • Privacy Policy
  • Terms of Use

Scholarships

  • Undergraduate Scholarships
  • Masters Scholarships
  • MBA Scholarships
  • Ph.D Scholarships
  • Fellowship Scholarships
  • Fully Funded Scholarships
  • F1 Visa Interview Questions And Answers
  • Scholarship Application Letter
  • Letter Of Intent For Scholarship
  • Personal Statement For Masters
  • Motivation Letter For Scholarship
  • Scholarship Acceptance Letter

Other Locations

  • Scholarships in UK
  • Scholarships in Canada
  • Scholarships for Nigerian Students
  • Scholarships for African Students
  • Study Abroad Community
  • [email protected]
  • +44 (0) 333 050 7764 (Mon-Fri (9AM-5PM)
  • Award-Winning Medicine Application Support
  • +44 (0) 333 050 7764 (Mon-Fri 9AM-5PM)

All UCAT Support

All Interview Support

  • Medical School Reviews
  • PS Free Resources
  • UCAT Free Resources
  • Interview Free Resources
  • Book A Free Consultation

Medicine Personal Statement Examples – King’s College London (Thomas)

Home » Application Guide » Medicine Personal Statement Examples – King’s College London (Thomas)

Application Guide Menu

A great starter bundle which includes some tutoring and resources.

Our most common bundle with 20 hours of tutoring, a live course and resources.

The most comprehensive UCAT bundle which has tons of tutoring and all of our resources.

Welcome to our collection of Medicine Personal Statement Examples! We’ve searched far and wide to find personal statements from successful applicants all around the UK and asked them to analyse the strengths and weaknesses of their work for your own inspiration. Today’s subject is from Thomas, who studies Medicine at King’s College London.

Thomas applied to study medicine back in 2018 at four amazing UK medical schools, including Bristol and Southampton . He received offers from 3 out of his four choices, of which he chose to study at King’s College London .

UniversityKing’s College LondonUniversity of BristolUniversity of SouthamptonUniversity of Sheffield
Offer? YesYesYes

Let’s read the personal statement that got him a place at KCL, or skip straight to his feedback to learn what made his personal statement a success!

Please be aware that these examples are meant purely for the sake of inspiration, and should absolutely NOT be used as a model around which to base your own personal statement. UCAS have a rather strict system that detects plagiarism .

King's College London Medicine Personal Statement Example

Whole personal statement.

My ambition to study medicine is driven by the interest in a career combining a deep understanding of the human body and clinical practice whilst having ultimate responsibility for a patient. It was my personal experience of a neurosurgical operation 5 years ago, seeing the determination of the surgeon who facilitated my recovery which inspired me to help people in the same way doctors helped me and to seek work experience to further my understanding of a career in medicine.

Work experience at the John Radcliffe Hospital aided my understanding of what being a doctor entails by shadowing doctors in neurosurgical and ENT departments. I noticed how doctors were under constant pressure to see as many patients as possible in a limited timeframe. The rational thinking behind each decision a doctor made was important when prioritising the sickest patients hence the ability to make quick and accurate decisions under pressure and working in a multidisciplinary team were necessary skills to achieve an optimal outcome for the patient. It was amazing to see how a critically ill child could make a full recovery demonstrating the impact of a doctor’s actions upon someone’s life.

Work experience at a GP surgery showed me the importance of communication skills when consulting patients. This enabled the GP to put the patient at ease by explaining their diagnosis in simple terms so they can understand their condition. This led me to read “Do No Harm,” by British neurosurgeon Henry Marsh. He gave an emotional account of how not everyone can be helped or, after help has been given, the desired outcome wasn’t reached. This accentuated the need for doctors to be resilient and compassionate to patients and their relatives. Studying both biology and chemistry helped me to write an extended essay on how efficient cannabidiol (CBD) is at preventing epileptic seizures. This is highly topical with the UK in the process of legalising CBD to treat those with refractory epilepsy. Reading research papers has introduced me to academic medicine and the role of a doctor as both a clinician and researcher. Studying ethics in A Level RS taught me how to use a moral framework when making decisions which can be transferred to medicine when applying GMC guidelines to clinical scenarios to achieve an optimal outcome for a patient.

Attending a MENCAP Summer Camp and volunteering weekly at a care home provided valuable insights into a different side of the healthcare spectrum away from a hospital setting. Both involved working with vulnerable people which I found incredibly rewarding. MENCAP showed me the importance of empathy in handling difficult situations and the value of teamwork in overcoming problems. Volunteering at the care home taught me that ensuring the dignity of vulnerable people and respecting their capacity to make decisions were critical in allowing residents to live fulfilled lives.

Participating in the Duke of Edinburgh scheme gave me experience of working in and leading teams and adapting to new situations. I’m passionate about athletics and football, having represented my school in both sports helping me to become a more driven individual. Being a prefect and houseroom assistant has furthered my sense of responsibility enabling me to develop my organisational and communication skills through interacting with a diverse range of people. Playing both guitar and piano led me to electronic music production with my songs being played globally. This has enhanced my ability to work under pressure and my lateral thinking when solving problems. I’m committed to studying medicine so I have taken a year out to further develop skills relevant to medicine by working as a HCA. Working with doctors will allow me to appreciate their role in the wider healthcare team and will maximise my exposure to clinical environments. Whilst medicine is a challenging degree I’m confident that I have the academic ability and skills required to be successful at medical school.

MEDICINE MASTERY BUNDLE

Achieve Medicine Mastery in all areas of your application, including the Personal Statement

Write an impressive Personal Statement with the help of our one-to-one tuition, in-depth resources, an intensive crash course and much more. 

Personal Statement Crash Course

Need some extra guidance in your Personal Statement preparations?

Signing up to the Personal Statement Bundle means you’ll be guided by expert Medics who will help you write the perfect Personal Statement and provide unlimited redraft submissions. 

Want to learn how to Write the Perfect Personal Statement? This bundle is the one for you…

King's College London Medicine Personal Statement Example Analysis

Now, let’s go section by section and see what Thomas has to say about what he wrote:  

INTRODUCTION

Introduction

My introduction is direct and states clearly the main reasons why I want to study medicine by linking more generic points (academic / communication / logical analysis) with a personal experience. I am able to very quickly justify why I am applying for this course, which allows me to save words later on that would have been spent trying to explain my interest in joining medicine as a career.

Structurally speaking, I could have broken down the sentences as they are quite hard to read due to their length. However, the main issue here is that this is too large and expansive for a personal statement introduction. The introduction should be fairly general (but personal too) rather than exploring areas such as work experiences . In some cases, a work placement may also be the true beginning of your medical journey but typically, you should use the introduction as a way to begin your story. While I frame my experience watching surgery as the start of my journey, this really wasn’t the case as I had an interest in medicine long before I entered that theatre. This unfortunately just feels out of place.  

Paragraph 1

The first paragraph of my personal statement immediately focuses on my own personal experience during my shadowing placement instead of mentioning more general broad points (which have already been addressed in the intro paragraph). I have demonstrated that I not only managed to arrange some experience myself but also what I took away from it in terms of the skills required to be a good doctor . The key strength of this paragraph is my reflection on the experience and the things I had seen. The way that I describe my time there and what I learned shows that I really paid attention to what was happening around me and that I was able to come to a sensible conclusion about what is required to be in this industry. Reflection is key to a good personal statement, so always go beyond the surface level when discussing your experiences.

To improve this paragraph, I could have used examples to demonstrate how, in my own life, I have developed and used the skills which I saw in my placement (such as working under pressure and teamwork). This would show the admissions team that I have not only understood what skills are required to be a competent clinician but also that I am capable of utilising these skills myself in a practical and relevant manner.  

Paragraph 2

This paragraph links a few different things together, including another shadowing experience, a book I have read related to medicine, my EPQ and ethical principles I have learnt through studying RS. This paragraph showed the admissions team that I understood medicine isn’t just about the academic theory but also about how you communicate and also how you make decisions using an ethical framework . One especially positive aspect of this is my ability to link all of these different topics in a way that feels connected and relevant. Finding the connections between these different experiences and then explaining them shows a great deal of awareness that some applicants will lack. On top of this, many of the positives from the last paragraph continue here.

When reading the paragraph, it can feel overwhelming as it links quite a few things together and is generally just a very large block of text. I could have split the paragraph up in half and could have tried to link the different aspects in the paragraph better to help with the flow. It would have still had the same effect while also being much easier to read.  

Paragraph 3

This paragraph focuses on another staple of good medicine personal statements; my volunteering . It shows the admissions team that I am a well-rounded individual who has experience in care outside of the immediate medical field, while also demonstrating the skills that would very easily carry over to my studies and career. I demonstrate the different skills I have developed which are important in being a good doctor. One area that is especially important for me personally is the closing sentences where I discuss the human side of care and the empathy required to do well in the field. This is an incredibly important, and sometimes overlooked, side of medicine that any good medical professional needs to be skilled in. Medicine is as much a human topic as it is scientific, so demonstrating this early on proves that you have the right attitude to be in the medical field.  

When listing the different skills I have developed I could actually give an example for each to show the admissions team that I can actually back up what I say. Listing things will only get you so far without the proper evidence and personal reflection to prove you fully understand what you’re writing. I also could have developed the second part of the paragraph (about the care home) further. There was much more to this experience than what I had discussed, but with a limited word count, I felt there would be less value in expanding this section compared to the earlier paragraphs.

Paragraph 4

Participating in the Duke of Edinburgh scheme gave me experience of working in and leading teams and adapting to new situations. I’m passionate about athletics and football, having represented my school in both sports helping me to become a more driven individual. Being a prefect and houseroom assistant has furthered my sense of responsibility enabling me to develop my organisational and communication skills through interacting with a diverse range of people. Playing both guitar and piano led me to electronic music production with my songs being played globally. This has enhanced my ability to work under pressure and my lateral thinking when solving problems.

Here, I discuss my extra-curricular activities , another valuable area to explore as a way of showing off my skills which as less conventional in terms of medicine. The first benefit of this discussion is that it shows the admissions team that I am a well-rounded person who can cope with whatever medical school throws at me. Having additional hobbies and activities is not only a good way of showing you can cope with stress but they also show what you can bring to the university in a more general sense. It’s not only about your skills in medicine but your overall life skills. To add additional value to this discussion, I link these activities back to a skill which I have learned and developed through each. This links everything back to the application, showing why everything I have mentioned will make me a great student at their university.  

The paragraph feels a bit to much like a list without elaborating too much on any one topic. I could have mentioned fewer activities and tried to expand on them slightly as otherwise, it does come across as though I am just trying to list a lot of different things at the end. I could have also been a bit more explicit in how these skills link back to medicine and the qualities of a good doctor specifically.

Looking for Personal Statement support?

We’ll do you one better!  The Medicine Mastery Bundle supports you through your Personal Statement, UCAT and Interview with 30+ hours of 1-1 tuition and a full suite of resources and features . 

Personal Statement Work Book

Personal Statement Workbook

Looking for more support with your Personal Statement?

When you sign up to 6med’s Personal Statement Bundle, you’ll be getting guidance from expert Medics, alongside a tonne of insightful resources to teach you everything you need to know about personal statement writing.

So are you ready to Write the Perfect Personal Statement? Then get started today with 6med!

I’m committed to studying medicine so I have taken a year out to further develop skills relevant to medicine by working as a HCA. Working with doctors will allow me to appreciate their role in the wider healthcare team and will maximise my exposure to clinical environments. Whilst medicine is a challenging degree I’m confident that I have the academic ability and skills required to be successful at medical school.

My conclusion is short and gets to the point quickly. I addressed the fact I am taking a year out and mentioned what I am planning to spend my time doing. It’s important to be upfront with the universities you’re applying to in regards to anything that may affect your studies. As long as you can justify these issues and potentially provide a solution or consolation, these won’t be deal breakers. My last sentence simply summarises what I have said in the rest of my PS by saying that whilst medicine is challenging I believe I have the skillset required to get through medical school. This is exactly what a final sentence should aim to do, so I believe mine is very successful and closes the personal statement off well.  

This conclusion is actually a part of the same paragraph as the last one, which in my opinion is a fairly big mistake. In hindsight, this should have been split in two which would have been a very easy issue to spot. Always be sure to review your work thoroughly as it’s very easy for a simple spelling mistake or structural issue to slip through the cracks.  

The conclusion does not link back to every part of the personal statement as well as it could have. Specifically, I could have tried to link back to the beginning and the middle parts of the statement a bit more to provide a synopsis of what I have already mentioned as otherwise, it can feel slightly detached. Although it’s important to consider that the conclusion shouldn’t take up too much of the word count, so simplifying things may be a better option.  

Final Thoughts

I believe I pack a lot into this personal statement without rushing or underselling any particular areas. I feel I spend the right amount of time on each section and provide a good amount of analysis and introspection in the parts that are most important. All of this analysis serves to demonstrate the knowledge and abilities that would make me an ideal candidate for their university, which is the whole point of the personal statement! Nearly everything I mention in my is personal – from my operation to my work experience which shows I have reflected upon these experiences.

There are areas in my personal statement where I could have expanded a bit more on my experiences as otherwise, it can come across as though I am trying to force random things into it. I noticed that sometimes I didn’t give examples of how I have demonstrated the skills I have seen by shadowing doctors on work experience. Providing examples is a way to justify mentioning these things, as they could otherwise be seen as meaningless additions used to pad out the word count or inflate your skillset in an impractical way. As well as this, a proper explanation can show that you understand exactly what is expected of a medical professional. Being aware of these requirements is incredibly important for being competitive as it’s easy to just assume that a lot of experience will make you a strong candidate. All of this would have reinforced why I am suitable for the course.

So there you have it! This personal statement helped Thomas get 3/4 offers in his application, which is almost perfect and gives you a great selection of options to pick from.  

Everyone has different experiences and abilities, so you may not be able to relate to everything that was said in this personal statement. However, the information and advice provided by Thomas is universal and will help any applicant write a better personal statement!  

Be sure to check out more Medicine Personal Statement Analyses to see advice from all different kinds of applicants, including Ali Abdaal himself! Or if you want to get started on your own statement, check out 6med’s Medicine Mastery Bundle for all the support and resources you’ll ever need! 

More Medicine Personal Statement Examples & Inspiration

Reapplying to Medicine – Anton’s Personal Statements

Medicine Personal Statement Inspiration – Jonathan (Cambridge)

Medicine Personal Statement Inspiration – Millie (Cambridge)

Medicine Personal Statement Inspiration – Duranka (Oxford)

Medicine Personal Statement Inspiration – James (UCL)

Graduate Entry Medicine Personal Statement – Samah (Cambridge)

Medicine Personal Statement Inspiration – Ali Abdaal (Cambridge)

Medicine Personal Statement Examples – Cambridge (Elizabeth)

Medical Biosciences Personal Statement Example – Imperial College London

Graduate Medicine Personal Statement Examples – Warwick (Laura)

Medicine Personal Statement Examples – Plymouth (Abdullah)

Medicine Personal Statement Examples – King’s College London (Azzra)

Graduate Medicine Personal Statement Examples – Brighton and Sussex

Medicine Personal Statement Examples – Cardiff University (Faris)

Medicine Personal Statement Examples – Cambridge (Lucy)

Graduate Medicine Personal Statement Examples – Sunderland (Ikrah)

Medicine Personal Statement Examples – Cambridge (Annie)

Medicine Personal Statement Examples – Oxford (Alexander)

Medicine Personal Statement Examples – Bristol (Faraz)

Medicine Personal Statement Examples – Cardiff University (Jemma)

Graduate Medicine Personal Statement Example – Barts Medical School

Medicine Personal Statement Examples – Nottingham (Aymen)

Dentistry Personal Statement Examples – Barts (Malikha)

Dentistry Personal Statement Examples – Cardiff (Eera)

Dentistry Personal Statement Examples – KCL (Saif)

Dentistry Personal Statement Examples – KCL (Emmy)

Are you feeling stuck with your Personal Statement?

Matthew Amalfitano-Stroud

unlock infinite medical wisdom

Just leave your email in the box and you’ll receive weekly updates and the best tips for your medical application!

Application Support

  • Personal Statement
  • Crash Courses
  • 1-1 Tutoring

Free Resources

  • Personal Statement Free Resources
  • Medicine Application Guides

Other Stuff

  • UCAT.Ninja™
  • Exams.Ninja
  • School Support
  • Tutor With Us
  • Medical School Success Calculator
  • Help Centre

Pay with confidence

  • Applying to Uni
  • Apprenticeships
  • Health & Relationships
  • Money & Finance

Personal Statements

  • Postgraduate
  • U.S Universities

University Interviews

  • Vocational Qualifications
  • Accommodation
  • ​​​​​​​Budgeting, Money & Finance
  • ​​​​​​​Health & Relationships
  • ​​​​​​​Jobs & Careers
  • ​​​​​​​Socialising

Studying Abroad

  • ​​​​​​​Studying & Revision
  • ​​​​​​​Technology
  • ​​​​​​​University & College Admissions

Guide to GCSE Results Day

Finding a job after school or college

Retaking GCSEs

In this section

Choosing GCSE Subjects

Post-GCSE Options

GCSE Work Experience

GCSE Revision Tips

Why take an Apprenticeship?

Applying for an Apprenticeship

Apprenticeships Interviews

Apprenticeship Wage

Engineering Apprenticeships

What is an Apprenticeship?

Choosing an Apprenticeship

Real Life Apprentices

Degree Apprenticeships

Higher Apprenticeships

A Level Results Day 2024

AS Levels 2024

Clearing Guide 2024

Applying to University

SQA Results Day Guide 2024

BTEC Results Day Guide

Vocational Qualifications Guide

Sixth Form or College

International Baccalaureate

Post 18 options

Finding a Job

Should I take a Gap Year?

Travel Planning

Volunteering

Gap Year Blogs

Applying to Oxbridge

Applying to US Universities

Choosing a Degree

Choosing a University or College

Personal Statement Editing and Review Service

Clearing Guide

Guide to Freshers' Week

Student Guides

Student Cooking

Student Blogs

Top Rated Personal Statements

Personal Statement Examples

Writing Your Personal Statement

Postgraduate Personal Statements

International Student Personal Statements

Gap Year Personal Statements

Personal Statement Length Checker

Personal Statement Examples By University

Personal Statement Changes 2025

Personal Statement Template

Job Interviews

Types of Postgraduate Course

Writing a Postgraduate Personal Statement

Postgraduate Funding

Postgraduate Study

Internships

Choosing A College

Ivy League Universities

Common App Essay Examples

Universal College Application Guide

How To Write A College Admissions Essay

College Rankings

Admissions Tests

Fees & Funding

Scholarships

Budgeting For College

Online Degree

Platinum Express Editing and Review Service

Gold Editing and Review Service

Silver Express Editing and Review Service

UCAS Personal Statement Editing and Review Service

Oxbridge Personal Statement Editing and Review Service

Postgraduate Personal Statement Editing and Review Service

You are here

Postgraduate international marketing personal statement example.

Businesses are woven into every part of our lives and marketing plays a key role in influencing our decisions. By understanding and developing relationships with consumers, businesses can be less obtrusive and more enriching to our lives; this in turn will grow more sustainable businesses.

This intersection between people and brands is a key area of interest which I am determined to build my knowledge and career on.

During my BSc course, emphasis was placed on observing user behaviour to find key insights. The empathy this human centred method gave me ultimately led to better designed products and services. I applied this to my role at Studio Make Believe as I analysed brand identities and the way they were perceived, to design products that effectively communicated their stories.

I also developed a research document expressing key insights for potential growth areas that the brand implemented. I saw the importance of marketing to develop creative strategies for more effective brand experiences.

Presenting products to clients and negotiating prices with suppliers gave me a practical outlook on the entire product lifecycle as well as the challenges of communicating across cultures. Due to these interactions, I am eager to learn strategic methods of branding and business management on an international platform.

I have been influenced by talks on the theory of affordances and explored the practical applications of behavioural economics in the International Design Camp. I collaborated with students from various disciplines to design services that would improve dental health in young children.

The experience made me considerate of many possible applications to marketing practices. I am eager to apply this design thinking and develop analytical skills in the Consumer Behaviour module. In the near future, I aim to pursue a career orienting brands and market research.

A personal endeavour to start my own business began as I travelled parts of India to better understand a culture I am a part of but have not really known. I noticed brands that we are familiar with at home were portrayed slightly differently to suit lifestyles of eastern consumers, whilst retaining their core image.

This drew me to connect with local manufacturers to design modern homewares, uniting traditional materials with a strong sense of functionality, that could be well received in western lifestyles. I saw the narrative of the collaborative process as a strong selling point.

Working with small communities to evolve dying crafts was a rewarding experience despite challenges of language barriers and differences in work ethic. I plan to turn this passion into a business. Taking this course would equip me with the practical and theoretical knowledge of all aspects of international marketing to achieve my long-term goal of making it a success.

Working as a manager and tutor for a local business has fed my appetite for analytical thinking. The learning environment has been advantageous to my creative career as it demands a flexible mind. I have seen the business grow from its humble beginnings, allowing me to see the value of marketing in the many roles I took, from designing the logo to managing other people.

I have seen the importance of the relationship between people and business on small and large scales. I believe this is more vital now to due globalisation and ever-growing digital economy. Businesses must now work harder to understand global cultures and values whilst upholding their own identity. Therefore International Marketing is crucial in grasping this area.

The research environment at King’s would allow me to build on insights which are critical to uncovering practical solutions to close this gap. I hope to contribute to discussions and develop knowledge for my personal development. I strive to better myself and would be honoured to resume my studies at King’s. The international reputation and global environment would stimulate and support my development.

Profile info

There is no profile associated with this personal statement, as the writer has requested to remain anonymous.

Author's Comments

I applied to King's college London for the International Marketing MSc. My BSc was in product design and I graduated with a 1st class degree. I didn't have much experience in marketing when I applied but I recieved an unconditional offer.

This personal statement is unrated

Related Personal Statements

Add new comment.

  • Ask a question Ask
  • go advanced Search
  • Please enter a title
  • Please enter a message
  • Your discussion will live here... (Start typing, we will pick a forum for you) Please select a forum Change forum View more forums... View less forums... GCSEs A-levels Applications, Clearing and UCAS University Life Student Finance England Part-time and temporary employment Chat Everyday issues Friends, family and work Relationships Health News Student Surveys and Research
  • post anonymously
  • All study help
  • Uni applications
  • University and HE colleges
  • University help and courses
  • University student life

Postgraduate

  • Careers and jobs
  • Teacher training
  • Finance and accountancy
  • Relationships
  • Sexual health
  • Give feedback or report a problem
  • University and university courses
  • Universities and HE colleges
  • Life and style
  • Entertainment
  • Debate and current affairs
  • Careers and Jobs
  • Scottish qualifications
  • Foreign languages
  • GCSE articles
  • A-level articles
  • Exam and revision articles
  • What to do after GCSEs
  • What to do after A-levels
  • When is A-level results day 2024?
  • When is GCSE results day 2024?
  • Studying, revision and exam support
  • Grow your Grades

Exam results articles and chat

  • Exam results homepage
  • A guide to GCSE and A-level grade boundaries
  • Year 13 chat
  • Year 12 chat
  • Year 11 chat

A-level results

  • Guide to A-level results day
  • Get help preparing for results day
  • A-level retakes and resits
  • Exam reviews and remarks
  • Here’s what to expect on A-level results day
  • Six ways to help results day nerves
  • Understanding your A-level results slip

GCSE results

  • Guide to GCSE results day
  • How GCSE combined science grades work
  • Stressed about GCSE results day?
  • Understanding your GCSE results slip

Finding a uni in Clearing

  • Clearing articles and chat
  • UK university contact details
  • Guide to Clearing
  • Seven things people get wrong about Clearing
  • How to make a great Clearing call
  • Finding accommodation after Clearing
  • How Clearing can help you prepare for results day
  • All universities
  • Applying through Ucas
  • Student finance
  • Personal statement
  • Postgraduate study
  • Uni accommodation
  • University life
  • All uni courses
  • Apprenticeships
  • Arts and humanities courses
  • Stem courses
  • Social science courses

Universities by region

  • North of England
  • South of England
  • Greater London
  • Distance learning
  • International study

University guides and articles

  • All university articles
  • Applying to uni articles
  • Personal statements
  • Personal statement examples
  • University open days
  • Studying law at university
  • Student life at university
  • Careers and jobs discussion
  • Apprenticeships discussion
  • Part-time and temp jobs
  • Career forums by sector
  • Armed forces careers
  • Consultancy careers
  • Finance careers
  • Legal careers
  • Marketing careers
  • Medicine and healthcare careers
  • Public sector careers
  • Stem careers
  • Teaching careers
  • General chat
  • Relationships chat
  • Friends, family and colleagues
  • Advice on everyday issues
  • General health
  • Mental health
  • UK and world politics
  • Educational debate

Undergraduate

  • Postgraduate Master’s Loan
  • Postgraduate Doctoral Loan
  • Disabled Students’ Allowances
  • Taking a break or withdrawing from your course

Further information

  • Parents and partners
  • Advanced Learner Loan

Kings College London

The Student Room and The Uni Guide are both part of The Student Room Group.

  • Main topics
  • GCSE and A-level
  • Exam results
  • Life and relationships

Get Started

  • Today's posts
  • Unanswered posts
  • Community guidelines
  • TSR help centre
  • Cookies & online safety
  • Terms & conditions
  • Privacy notice

Connect with TSR

© Copyright The Student Room 2023 all rights reserved

The Student Room and The Uni Guide are trading names of The Student Room Group Ltd.

Register Number: 04666380 (England and Wales), VAT No. 806 8067 22 Registered Office: Imperial House, 2nd Floor, 40-42 Queens Road, Brighton, East Sussex, BN1 3XB

king's college master personal statement

IMAGES

  1. How to write a Personal Statement for Master's (Postgraduate)

    king's college master personal statement

  2. 💋 Writing a personal statement for college application. 5 Tips On How

    king's college master personal statement

  3. ⛔ Masters personal statement example. Personal Statement For Masters

    king's college master personal statement

  4. Example of a Personal Statement for a Masters

    king's college master personal statement

  5. Reading my Master's Personal Statement (Postgraduate)

    king's college master personal statement

  6. Graduate Personal Statement

    king's college master personal statement

VIDEO

  1. Three Minute Thesis (3MT) Grand Final 2024

  2. Departments at King's

  3. How to Write a Personal Statement for a UK University Master's Application. #studyabroad

  4. เรียนต่อ LLM ที่ King's College London l พี่ปั้นรีวิว LLM Inter Financial & Commercial Law ที่ KCL

  5. Personal Statement Structure

  6. University of King's College. Halifax, Nova Scotia

COMMENTS

  1. PDF Personal Statements and References for Beginners

    Test is 2 hours and is split into five section. Sat at local Pearson VUE test centre. Results available as printout from test centre. Verbal Reasoning - 22 minutes - 44 items Quantitative Reasoning - 25 minutes - 36 items Abstract Reasoning - 14 minutes - 55 items Decision Analysis - 32 minutes - 28 items Situational Judgement - 27 minutes - 67 ...

  2. 10 top tips for writing a postgraduate personal statement

    8. Be concise and clear. Admissions officers review hundreds of personal statements, so it's essential to be concise and to the point. Avoid using overly complex language or jargon, and ensure that your writing is clear, well-organised, and easy to follow. Aim for clarity and coherence throughout your statement.

  3. Application Guidelines

    Personal Statement; ... Master of Science in Health Care Administration - Online, two-year program, 37 credits. ... King's College is committed to equal opportunity in the admission of students in administration of its educational program and activities, without discrimination based on race, national or ethnic origin, religion, gender ...

  4. Nutrition and Dietetics Master's Degree

    A 1000 word personal statement detailing the following: ... While King's College Master of Science in Nutrition and Dietetics (MSND) graduate students are admitted from all over the USA, many of our applicants may be from the tri-state area (Pennsylvania, New Jersey, New York) , and it may be anticipated that there will be significant overlap ...

  5. Important information for postgraduate students

    Important information for postgraduate students. The King's Admissions Office is here to help you throughout the application process. We hope the information below will help with most queries. If you can't find the answer to your question, feel free to contact our King's Advisors, or attend a postgraduate event to find out more.

  6. King's College London Personal Statements

    King's College University Personal Statements. These UCAS personal statements have been kindly provided by students applying to King's College London. You can click on one of the links below to view the entire statement and find out if the applicant was offered a place. You can also view our entire collection of personal statements or view ...

  7. Nutrition Science Master's Degree

    The King's College Master of Science in Nutrition Science program is a 36-credit, online degree program geared to busy working professionals who want a competitive advantage in the job market. ... In addition, you must provide your current resume and a 1000-word personal statement detailing why you are interested in applying to this program ...

  8. Important information for applying

    In your UCAS application you will be asked to provide: A personal statement. Full education history. A reference. However, if you have any additional documents which you need to send to King's to add to your application, the best way to do this is to send us a scanned copy of the file: once you have received your King's Apply log-in details ...

  9. Applying & writing your personal statement

    Applying & writing your personal statement. From Christina Troullides September 23, 2021. views comments. Details. ... Watch this video to find out everything you need to know about the UCAS application process and tips on how to write your personal statement. To watch the full video and find out more about applying visit: kcl.ac.uk/ug-apply.

  10. Postgraduate Virtual Open Week: Writing your Personal Statement

    Associateship of King's College; Business School; Dentistry Oral & Craniofacial Sciences; ... Postgraduate Virtual Open Week: Writing your Personal Statement. An introduction to Writing your Personal Statement followed by Q&A panel with current students. This webinar was produced in November 2021. Although it was up-to-date at the time it was ...

  11. Personal Statement For Masters (17 PDF Sample Examples)

    10. personal statement for masters in finance. msc finance personal statement examples. 11. statement of purpose for masters in information technology pdf. msc personal statement examples for information technology. 12. international development personal statement. statement of purpose for masters example.

  12. How to write a Personal Statement for Master's (Postgraduate)

    ART STOREhttps://www.redbubble.com/people/atousaart/shop?asc=u//it's almost been a year since I was making applications to postgraduate courses, and since it...

  13. Dentistry Personal Statement Examples

    Today's subject is from Saif, who studies Dentistry at King's College London. Saif applied to study Dentistry back in 2021 at four amazing UK Dental Schools, including KCL, University of Bristol and University of Glasgow. ... Graduate Medicine Personal Statement Example - Barts Medical School . READ THIS STATEMENT > Medicine Personal ...

  14. reading my masters personal statement (KCL)

    this is the personal statement that got me into king's college london for my masters / postgraduate course - i'm studying a MA in medical ethics and law. i t...

  15. Postgraduate taught entry requirements

    Depending on your programme, there may be additional requirements for entry. These could include: Occupational health. Disclosure and Barring Service (DBS) checks. Academic Technology Approval Scheme (ATAS) clearance. This applies to students who require entry clearance to study in the UK in certain science, engineering or technology subjects.

  16. How to Apply for a KCL Masters

    6-step King's College Masters application process Step 1. Research available courses ... Read our guide to writing a Master's personal statement for more tips. Any additional documents. Some courses may require, for example, written pieces of work. Full details of any necessary documents can be found on individual course pages.

  17. Medicine Personal Statement Examples

    Read through Thomas's successful Medicine Personal Statement for King's College London, where he will analyse the strengths, weaknesses and overall quality of his statement to inspire your own writing. ... Next Graduate Medicine Personal Statement Example - Barts Medical School Next. Matthew Amalfitano-Stroud . Prev Previous Medicine Personal ...

  18. Postgraduate International Marketing Personal Statement Example

    I applied to King's college London for the International Marketing MSc. My BSc was in product design and I graduated with a 1st class degree. I didn't have much experience in marketing when I applied but I recieved an unconditional offer. This personal statement is unrated. Businesses are woven into every part of our lives and marketing plays a ...

  19. King's College Masters Personal Statement

    King's College Masters Personal Statement - Help!! A. Beanster. I'm currently applying for MA Conflict, Security & Development at King's College London. I achieved a First class for my Undergraduate degree but got a 3rd class for one of my second year modules. Do I have to explain this in my personal statement?

  20. Postgraduate taught

    To help prepare you with your next steps, we've put together some useful information and guidance on our postgraduate offer holder hub, available on our webpage below. Here you can watch subject videos, listen to student stories, discover accommodation options and more. Postgraduate offer holders 2024.

  21. Kings College London Personal Statement Length

    Generally speaking a personal statement for postgrad should be around 800 words. Anything over 1000 words is too long. Well, mine was about 3 pages for the master's program there. I think i was the first to be accepted. I didn't have any non-sense in my though. It was a very good paper.

  22. Kings College London

    Personal Statement:Electrical and Electronic Engineering 5. Personal Statement:English 22. Personal Statement:English 25. Personal Statement:English Language 1. Personal Statement:English Literature 1. Personal Statement:English Literature 4. Personal Statement:English Literature 12. Personal Statement:European Studies 2.

  23. Master of Laws

    The Master of Laws (LLM) at The Dickson Poon School of Law is a respected academic qualification recognised throughout the world and across key legal disciplines. It focuses on our particular areas of expertise and offers a choice of nine specialist pathways or a general LLM qualification. We place particular emphasis on innovative and problem-solving teaching methods as well as comparative ...